Puisi Si Umar

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Beberapa minggu yang lalu saya membelikan Umar mainan Airsoft gun berbentuk Shotgun P288. Dia senang sekali, dan memainkannya dengan riang gembira.

Kemarin, dia sedang belajar B.Indonesia, dan salah satu materinya adalah Puisi. Saya katakan, coba lah membuat puisi, tentang apa saja. Lalu saya ajarkan bentuk-bentuk puisi sederhana.

Hasil kolaborasi Umar & saya adalah sbb :

SHOTGUN KU

Shotgun Umar baru
Sangat keren dan bau
Sampai dirumah hari Sabtu
Kupakai untuk menembak Papa ku

Lumayan…. 🙂 🙂

407 thoughts on “Puisi Si Umar

  1. senang sekali ya bisa bikin orang bahagia.
    memang arus begitu.
    puisi yang indah yang terlahir.
    embrio cinta yang membumi san segar.
    biarkan mengalir dalam kritis kecerdasan jiwa.
    ia ada untuk terus ada.

  2. kolaborasi yang pas pak,
    rangkaian kata2nya juga pas…Puisi si Umar…

    izin berkunjung disini..

  3. Sungguh kegiatan yang bagus belajar membuat puisi. Banyak bidang yang bisa kita ajarkan kepada generasi penerus, termasuk bidang Sastra. Selamat dan sukses untuk kita semua.

  4. Semua orang sebenarnya memiliki kemampuan untuk membuat puisi, secara sederhana isi puisi dapat mengenai segala hal mengenai keseharian kita dimana aja.

  5. Poetry is one thing that completely entangled with everyone’s life. A good poetry gives pleasure to mind and it relaxes stress.

  6. belajar puisinya berakhiran huruf u, boleh juga tuch…he…
    aq tambahkan dua bait berakhiran r :

    siumar pergi kepasar
    dia berjalan-jalan mencari pacar

  7. halo salam kenal…………..
    ini pertama kali saya maen kesini, langsung baca postingan singkat ini……..
    singkat memang tapi lucu…. ^_^

  8. teruskan …lama-lamakan bisa dibukukan. atau kalau nggak minimal bisa untuk menghibur (merayu) someone. sekarang saja sudah banyak yang komen.

  9. heheheheee bagus tu mas, namanya juga msih kecil, butuh waktu untuk berkembang.. oya, tukeran link yukk. link mas dah aku add di broggrollku, di home page lagi.. tolong ya mas..

  10. Shotgun Umar baru
    Sangat keren dan bau
    Sampai dirumah hari Sabtu
    Kupakai untuk menembak Papa ku

    nice.^_^v

  11. wah..kreatif juga anak anda ya,mas..Jadi pengen cepet punya anak neeh..Tapi gimana ya..? belum laku mas…ada yang single gak..Aq cari istri neeh..

  12. Waspadalah

    waktu kecil suka main pistolan
    saat menginjak remaja gemar main petasan
    kalau sudah gede bikin senjata rakitan
    bom dianggap mainan
    jadi teroris jalanan …

    sungguh mengerikan!

    salam

  13. Sungguh kegiatan yang bagus belajar membuat puisi. Banyak bidang yang bisa kita ajarkan kepada generasi penerus, termasuk bidang Sastra.

  14. hahaha…
    mungkin itu yg namanya senjata makan tuan ya mas??
    dibeliin air softgun malah dipake buat nembak papa sendiri
    🙂

  15. lucu juga… kompak,, mudah2 an terkenal kayak artis 2 maya,or duo kribo, 2 sejoli etc. heeee

  16. senang sekali ya bisa bikin orang bahagia.
    memang arus begitu.
    puisi yang indah yang terlahir.
    embrio cinta yang membumi san segar.
    biarkan mengalir dalam kritis kecerdasan jiwa.
    ia ada untuk terus ada.

  17. haha… Bapa ma Anak sama Pinternya nih, kalau bisa bikin grup pelawak hehehe biar bisa ngalahin opera van java, pas bangeet mudah 2an abis d tembak, bapanya cuma pura2 mati aja hehe, met bro anaknya, mga sukses slalu

  18. Sungguh kegiatan yang bagus belajar membuat puisi. Banyak bidang yang bisa kita ajarkan kepada generasi penerus, termasuk bidang Sastra. Selamat dan sukses untuk kita semua.

  19. memang kegiata paing asik adalah saat2 belajar bersama anak ya mas, denger celoteh2nya, denger pertanyaan2nya kadang bikin keki tp kadang kita juga kehabisan buat menjawab pertanyaan2 anak

  20. wah wah wah…
    puisinya bagus pak…
    melebihin karyanya seniman yang sesungguhnya kayaknya nih…

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  31. Ha ha ha, jujur walau tulisan blog ini sangat pendek, tapi
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    dan puisi yang dibuat si umar sangat lucu…..

    ha ha ha,… jangan sampai papa nya tahu,

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